Henna and Pree's Sexy Adventures With Syn and Vengeance - Comments

  • heretic.

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    Oh Brian, Brian, Brian *shakes head* you let the green eyes monster get te better of you, and not Zacky this time haha, you idiot! That's men for you though, they make a habit of speaking before thinking, if they think at all sometimes. I hope Henna will forgive you, you've got a lot of grovelling to do young man!

    More soon :D
    October 16th, 2013 at 11:46pm
  • shortygirl

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    That title really sums of the chapter. Syn really fucked that up.
    October 15th, 2013 at 11:45pm
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    Oh my god Brian you screwed up big time. Update soon please?
    October 15th, 2013 at 07:01pm
  • MoMo_92

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    The actually fuck Brian, u r so insecure I swear I just want to punch u in the face sometimes, now u definitely has some making up to do and I'm talking like major ass kissing to do, and Henna sweetie u should have taken tht conversation in the back room like Brian had said yes what the conversation was about was a little bit fucked up but his friends shouldn't be in the conversation it was an A and B conversation not the whole alphabet and maybe if u was in the backroom u could have explained it a little bit better instead of being under pressure with Matt and Brian breathing down ur neck for answers but sometimes u should let someone know where u r goin becuz Brian is goin to ask and worry I mean u could have been kidnapped or just left for all he knows yes u guys need space but at least kno each other's whereabouts, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    October 15th, 2013 at 06:23pm
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    The actually fuck Brian, u r so insecure I swear I just want to punch u in the face sometimes, now u definitely has some making up to do and I'm talking like major ass kissing to do, and Henna sweetie u should have taken tht conversation in the back room like Brian had said yes what the conversation was about was a little bit fucked up but his friends shouldn't be in the conversation it was an A and B conversation not the whole alphabet and maybe if u was in the backroom u could have explained it a little bit better instead of being under pressure with Matt and Brian breathing down ur neck for answers but sometimes u should let someone know where u r goin becuz Brian is goin to ask and worry I mean u could have been kidnapped or just left for all he knows yes u guys need space but at least kno each other's whereabouts, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    October 15th, 2013 at 06:23pm
  • DaniGates

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    Ah! I loved this chapter! Brian and Zacky need to get a room! LMAO! kidding! Loved it! Can't wait for the next dose :D
    October 4th, 2013 at 03:07am
  • MoMo_92

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    Cute ending, the moment between Zacky and Brian was adorable anyhoo great story, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    September 25th, 2013 at 07:34pm
  • heretic.

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    Brian is totally gay for him he just won't admit it, loved that part! Haha the ending was sooooo sweet! Can't wait for the next one :D
    September 25th, 2013 at 04:38am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    I had a feeling it was Pree knocking on Zacky's door.
    Can't wait to see what happens next!
    More soon please!!
    September 24th, 2013 at 03:33am
  • Jimmystallionduck_92

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    I love the story, this if just wow.. I'm still dying on the part where Matt was reading a fan fic the one where he was gay and there a gay sex scene with Brian and he couldn't read anymore because it was too weird for him.. That was priceless. XD
    September 24th, 2013 at 12:59am
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    Loved it! My favorite part probably has to be that moment between Syn and Zacky though XD it made me laugh. I can't wait to read more
    September 23rd, 2013 at 09:28am
  • shortygirl

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    Loved the update
    September 23rd, 2013 at 04:18am
  • purple89

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    I live in Woodbrook. Which is great when carnival rolls around because the bands pass in front of my house!
    September 5th, 2013 at 10:54pm
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    Port of Spain was where she lived before she came over to the states, St. James specifically. I still have a ton of family there, though. What part do you reside in?
    September 5th, 2013 at 06:48pm
  • purple89

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    @ Your.Desi.Girl
    That's pretty cool. Which part of Trinidad is your moms side from!?
    September 5th, 2013 at 04:24pm
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    My entire mom's side of the family is Trini! [my dad and his family is from Guyana, so I'm half and half, but that's another story]
    September 5th, 2013 at 04:20pm
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    @ Your.Desi.Girl
    So you've been to Trinidad or you've visited before? I'm glad you found the story and I'm sure Henna is too.
    September 5th, 2013 at 01:36pm
  • Your.Desi.Girl

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    Found this today and I've gotta say that it is AWESOME!

    I love the concept - it's so different from all the other stuff out here and I found parts to be hysterical.

    Purple: when you're there describing Trini and all the food, you make me want to be there so bad! I know exactly what you're talking about and it makes me miss it all!

    Great job girls, I look forward to more!
    September 5th, 2013 at 04:59am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Loved the update!!!
    Henna and Brian are so freaking adorable!!
    Please update soon!
    September 3rd, 2013 at 04:37am
  • heretic.

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    Dammit, twice now they've tried to kiss and gotten interrupted. Guys, let them smooch!! Haha

    I like that Brian knew the fancy restaurant wouldn't be her thing, wouldn't be mine either. A burger and a coke and I'm happy haha

    I LOVE that drawing!! It's so good! Can't wait to see what happens next! ;D
    September 2nd, 2013 at 05:33pm