She Will Be Loved - Comments

Thanks for the update:) do it again sooner lol

Love this,please update soon please! C:

This is really really good so far. Please update asap! I've gotten virtually nothing to do this weekend, and it'd be awesome to have a bunch of great chapters to read! :)

I'm very intrigued by this story. Update soon please!

I like it:-)

This story is really good! I can't wait to read more!

@ foreversmiling2198
Aw, thanks! I'm a fiction writer, and I've never touched fan-fiction before this, so that's really nice of you to say. I'll double space from now on- it's a good idea, I've never used this site before, so I'm working on figuring everything out, including format.

This story is off to a really good start, you're an incredible writer. I just want to give you one piece of advice, you don't have to take it or anything, but if you could just put spaces between the lines whenever someone spoke, it would make it a lot easier to read...but you really don't need to take it because like I said earlier, this story is really good and you're an amazing writer. Keep up the good work!