Angels Choking on Their Halos - Comments

shit shit shit this smut is amazing wow i actually adore this fic its my fave

@ Gaskarthloveme
@ Iceyythepenguin
@ sowrongitshayley
@ LastOneStanding
@ MasqueradingMemories
@ fagsgarth
@ wokeupfromdreaming
@ SimplySoniax3

Thank you all so much for commenting you are all ridiculously amazing ILY all <3 xox

Seriously cannot get enough of your writing. It's so good! I'm excited for the next part lovely <3

I absolutely love your writing style; it's unique and non repetitive. You have a great way of explaining things and using great grammar. All in all, this story is amazing and the world needs more original fanfics like these.

Please update asap this story is amazing and one of my favorites already. I've never read something like that before and it's perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter xxx

I love this story so much!! Please update soon!!

I love like the whole concept of this and I really love the way you're writing it. Like kind of mysterious, I guess? I don't know what to call it but I love it<3

so is alex becoming a sex slave kinda? wow okay i really like this a lot okay i know i said i was skeptical but this is amazing honestly i have yet to read something this intriguing. amazing job!

Oh lord. Don't know what to say but goodness the way you write just. Wow. I'm really excited as to where this will be going because I feel sort of lost in the best way yknow? Everything seems so mysterious

OK sorry i forgot to comment after i finished but let me tell you something.

I have been wanting a creepy and like totally different fic just like this for a really long time. its really unique (cause lets face it pretty much everything has been written for jalex) i honestly cannot wait for more of this:)

@ fagsgarth
Wow. Wow thank you soo much, thanks xox

Oh my god I had to stop int the middle of reading to comment because wow this is so fucking good??????

@ wokeupfromdreaming
I hope my plot eventually does interest you. The next chapter is sure to explain a lot of things. Thank you for commenting xx

@ filthybarakarth
Just for the simple fact that you are older than me I don't think I could :D Thanks for the lovely comment I'm sure your writing is fantastic anyway.

although it has a dark feel, this story is beautiful! I've never read a fanfic so poetic sounding. I don't think I've read anything so amazing! I lack vocabulary in my writing, but what you do is my goal. Can you be my English teacher, or something? xD

i'll admit i was kind of skeptical about this plotline simply because i have yet to see a good fic with this idea but you really created an interesting story line and its written very nicely. i am slightly confused about certain things but i'm sure they will be explained as the story goes on. i love your writing style and the metaphors you use and the vivid imagery. it's honestly amazing. cheers xo

@ Just_Let_Love_Be_
Do not be so low on yourself, love. I can tell but the way just that comment is worded that you are a fantastic writer. I thank you so very much for this amazing comment, it truly brightened up my morning to read, I cannot wait to carry this on. x

Your language is beautiful. I found myself reading this avidly, yet with a flare of jealousy in the back on my mind. A lot of writers these days are very simple in their speech (myself included, mind you, my vocabulary is not impressive when I write fanfiction because I find myself becoming the characters as they are in reality) and I respect you a lot for the way your words seem to flow effortlessly. It's very soothing.

As for the plot, I think you have a very different and exciting thing going on here, and I hope you don't rush through it like a lot of authours tend to when they get further into a plot.

I look forward to your continuation on this!

@ phoenixlikeyfire
Thank you so much for that comment xoxoxox

@ AkiPanda413
There might be ;) thanks for the comment xoxo