Caught in the Middle - Comments

  • VELVELA

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    Hey everyone, I was letting you guys know I made a twitter just for my book reasons. It will keep you updated on when I am thinking about posting and all that jazz. Please follow me! It is @Velvela97
    October 29th, 2013 at 10:57pm
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    Okay guys, i lied. I won't be able to get it updated. :(. But, I am going to get a couple more chapters typed up and will update them once I get home back to Internet!!!
    August 11th, 2013 at 04:05am
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    @ madiecorn
    Aww thanks!! I will update before the week is over and then get the rest typed out to post it!
    August 4th, 2013 at 10:39pm
  • madiecorn

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    i absolutely love this please update sooner its so perfectttt
    August 1st, 2013 at 06:22am
  • VELVELA

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    Sorry I have not really updated lately. I am going through a phase of life that isn't to enjoyable. If that makes any sense. I will work on getting another chapter or two up as soon as possible. I just haven't been to eager to write here lately and am doing my best to get back into the hang of things.
    July 8th, 2013 at 07:11am
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    @ Soleil
    I will try my best. This is made from a role play I am currently in and I don't want to add too much to it though that isn't actually in it, but I am sure I can do something about this.
    April 30th, 2013 at 11:16pm
  • Ivy 404

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    I like the concept of your story. And it sounds like something I will enjoy reading but the point of view switches are kinda redundant . If you start a point of you switch with the character's name you don't really need to put that it is their point of view.
    April 30th, 2013 at 12:06pm
  • Soleil

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    This story is so cute! Im definitely going to keep my eye on it! The only thing is that this seems more like a human romance...I would try and add more "Demon/Angel Power" to it. If that makes any sense! Haha :)
    April 30th, 2013 at 07:25am