Images of Whispers - Comments

I'm jealous of your writing, just like any other good writer on this site. Reading what you create, than reading mine makes me feel like an amateur. But, I guess that's just normal for a 14yr old girl. Right? Anyways, incredible writing. It's so refreshing to see such a thing, but also surprising to say that it isn't published yet.

leave comments my readers if my story entertains you :)

Thanks for the friend request. I like this story very much and I have subscribed to it. Your layout needs to be changed though. Other than that, I find this to be a very interesting story.

Please do leave comments, ask me questions or anything. I'm piecing my story together chapter by chapter, and I'd like some feedback as to how I'm doing right now. I haven't written in English in a long time, so I may be a little rusty.