Such a sweet, well-written story! I really like the writing style and how you detail things. It really makes the story come alive and makes it more interesting :)
Now that I was able to read it more peacefully, I really like all the little things you added to it and the detail you put in! It's very cute and Jack was so sweet. Also, you're welcome (for getting you hooked). xD
Awww you're too kind ;;3;; I wrote this for Midnight Dreary ^.^ I tried to go all out for this one shot since it was a present to her.