You Don't Fear The Boogeyman? You Should - Comments

@ Crazie Kat
Cool

@ January Rose
I wanted to end with Raven. More of an inside what was really going with her.

I liked the ending!
Glad they one! This calls for a dance party!

There strategy seems to be working. That's good.

@ January Rose
He's only getting smarter. Time for the fun!

Jackson is SMART! Go him!

@ Crazie Kat
I'm glad. I like Jack
Okay cool
Oh, now I get it.

@ January Rose
Don't worry those Jackson won't let his father die.
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There some chapters left, I'm getting close to rapping it up. You'll know when its over.
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That's why I started Lady-X

Glad they got Raven back. It seems like they are going to need her.
Poor Jack, dying in the hands of his enemy Pitch.

@ Crazie Kat
I'm glad

@ January Rose
It seems the poor kid can't win, but he will find away.

Poor Jackson. But I know he can figure out the game and win.

@ January Rose
Your welcome

@ Crazie Kat
Ooooooooh okay. That makes sense.
Thanks for explaining

@ January Rose
Either way both creepy. Its really Dark Storm she was pretending to be Jack. I confused myself at first with that too. I will tell you characters in other realms do get confusing because realms are unexpected and twisted.

@ Crazie Kat
Coo. I love playing around with layouts to!

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Cool. That's a creative way.

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He is a creeper. But I don't understand how he is Storm. There 2 completely different people. They aren't even the same gender!

@ January Rose
I wasn't even going to give it a new lay out, but I made one by just playing around with it.
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The capsules projecting memories, I needed away for them to find them.
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If Dark Jack creeps you out that's the whole point. He creeps me out.

I love the layout! Super cool!

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I like the idea of the tooth capsules projecting memories of the people they belong too. Creative.

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The Dark Jake guy is really staring to creep me out.

So happy that Jackson survived! And they found another capsule! Go team them!

I like Melody's power, and it will defiantly come in handy in this game Pitch is making them play. I just hope they win and get everyone back.