Playing Rough - Comments

Wait what!?!??!?!??!! Please do a sequel soon! I want to know how this plays out! Loved the story btw. :-D

@ MITCHEAE
Thanks! I'm glad you like the story! And don't worry, all your questions will be answered in the sequel!

duh duh duh... Love it : )
What's jon going to say? and I thought she didn't get an invite

Glad Noah finally accepts Jon. They are such a cute couple.

awe that's so sweet!! Thanks so much for updating this, I've missed it. I can't believe her brother is acting like a brat. I hope he gets over himself. I love this, PMS

so sweet

Woohoo for them and Noah needs to back off the protective bro just a bit!!

David is so the typical little brother. I loved seeing his family interact with her and I'm glad Bryan came around and apologized. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS

I laughed out loud at David's goodbye!!

Awwww Jon is too cute :)

Yay!!!!!

update soon and sad her name not called

Ahh Hoodie Allen!!! I seriously love him! I love this story too so please update again soon!

@ All You Need Is Ice_

Thank you so much for the tip! And I'm glad you're liking the story!

Oh my gosh, Chicago is so beautiful, I love it too. :) and I also love this story so far! I'm excited to see what her reaction is to Jon kissing her!

I know how to put the links in the story as well. You do [url=(put url here)](put text here)[/url]
Don't put the parentheses in though!

I love this story. Not even kidding. The fact that I have to wait for an update makes me sad! Your dialogue in it is perfect, and definitely helps the story. I feel like you could be a little more descriptive, but gah I love this story :)

I love this story. Not even kidding. The fact that I have to wait for an update makes me sad! Your dialogue in it is perfect, and definitely helps the story. I feel like you could be a little more descriptive, but gah I love this story :)

Oh no... this is going to kill me until the next chapter comes out. You're doing a great job. Keep it up!

Thanks for the update! Glad the hawks are in the story now :)

uh oh what happened?