At Least Pretend You Didn't Wanna Get Caught - Comments

omfg please write moreeeeeeeeee

IS THERE A CHANCE YOU CAN WRITE MORE PLEASE PLEAAASSEEEEEE

holy fucking shit alexs back dimples are one of the hottest things in the entire world and i have been waiting for WHAT FEELS LIKE A THOUSAND YEARS FOR SOMEONE TO WRITE SOMETHING ABOUT THEM BECAUSE HELLO FUCKING SEXY AS SHIT
okay
please update omg i just found this and i really like it and please <858483

Update this pleaseeee

i love this klajslajkajlak

This is so good oh my god

I agree with @ m0riarty okay.
plus, my grandma did the same thing Alex did with the spaghetti no lie so I had a great time laughing my ass off. it would be great to have a cook Jack at my house, obviously. great story btw, I love it!

Will this end in jalex
It better end in jalex
I need the jalex

@ Tea And Fanfics
oh wow that's a long day! I corrected that part in the story so I hope it's good now. Thanks for letting me know:)

I love how Jack's a chef as that's my chosen career path. The only thing I can is most hours in a kitchen (at least in my csse) are more like 10+ instead of eight. But otherwise I can't wait for the rest.

This is so good so far! I can't wait for more

I already like this a lot

This is an awesome beginning to the story! Can't wait to read more!