This was absolutely amazing. The last chapter, it was really good. I like the overall tone of the story and I love how simple and yet elegant it feels. Idk if that makes sense. But, I loved this
That's really all there is to it, but I'm going to continue so you aren't wasting your time in reading this comment!
I love how you have laid out this story. The layout is perfect for the story, and leaves a serene feeling as you read. The simple and yet direct text is compelling, and each line plays an important part. It's so beautiful, and I'm really eager to read more.