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  • Metalwhore

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    Great story! Good idea to explain their relationship, because the readers can understand the relationship that breaks down. Update soon please? :)
    October 29th, 2013 at 09:18am
  • Foos922

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    I like your story. Update soon. :)
    October 29th, 2013 at 05:55am
  • Red Lyte

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    @ Heartluver
    Starting in chapter 6 its past tense. I'm making it to where you see how their relationship got to where its at in the present.
    October 29th, 2013 at 03:36am
  • Heartluver

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    I'm confused, is this happening in the present tense or past tense?
    October 29th, 2013 at 03:26am
  • HerNameIsAlice

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    That was so cute!
    October 29th, 2013 at 03:02am
  • inactive0888888

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    has it been one week yet? *waits anxiously for next update*
    June 16th, 2013 at 10:58am
  • AJ9

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    I like this .... Looking forward to more soon Mr. Green
    June 16th, 2013 at 10:23am
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