Bittersweet - Comments

damongurl12 (100)

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i love this story too

June 29th, 2014 at 01:19am

psuche (100)

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I love this! Update soon :)

August 18th, 2013 at 06:34am

MentalMassDebation (100)

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Hmm. Interesting. Very interesting.
I hope to read more soon.

August 16th, 2013 at 12:43am

Maddi; (6100)

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I absolutely love the beginning of this story! I like how you started out with the mystery of Kat not remembering what happened, because that's a great way to get readers hooked on your story. With it starting off with so much mystery, you'll leave them wanting to read more so they can get more answers!

The only thing I don't like is the POV changes in the middle of the chapter. There's nothing wrong with it, per say, but it's just something that I've never been a fan of. I just like to either see third person or the same narrator throughout the story, because that makes for less confusion when reading.

August 6th, 2013 at 08:32pm

NeverXUnderstoodXIt (100)

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I'm such a Peter fan, and I really like the premise of this story, I will await your update!

July 17th, 2013 at 02:31am

Alejandra1 (100)

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Please update :D

July 11th, 2013 at 06:15am