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  • requiem.

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    I spotted a few tense inconsistencies. The narration was alright, but I feel like it could have been better, especially with the voices in Matt's head and his drive for killing. Also, I really like the quote in the summary!
    September 28th, 2013 at 08:25pm
  • StacieIerogeance

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    ohhhhhhhhhhhh i like this so far cant wait to see where it leads to
    July 5th, 2013 at 08:10pm
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    ohhhhhhhhhhhh i like this so far cant wait to see where it leads to
    July 5th, 2013 at 08:10pm
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