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  • Jessii Tara;

    Jessii Tara; (100)

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    Pffffft, not good at strictly romance, honey, you do need to be. Your writings like this is perfect!

    On another note, poor Jesslyn! Why the fans gotta be so harsh!?
    June 25th, 2013 at 09:10pm
  • honeyjoons

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    Awwwww this made my heart hurt! Poor Jesslyn!
    But I really loved the way you wrote this what with adding in the things they said in there and omg when they attacked her I was so mad Grr
    I wish she would've stuck it out but I also liked that the ending wasn't so predictable Cute
    June 25th, 2013 at 05:26am
  • renai.

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    Oh, but you know this is perfect~.
    June 23rd, 2013 at 11:42pm
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