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  • MellTheWatermellon

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    I love how you said glorious lol
    October 4th, 2013 at 10:39pm
  • kebssss

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    Idek. I guess Jack changed his mind? Haha! Not sure. I didn't think through the story. Aww. Thanks though. :)
    July 21st, 2013 at 08:20am
  • YouMeAtATL

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    I love
    This but I have a few questions. At first didnt you say Alex was the sub? And then jack was saying he was gonna fuck Alex but Alex fucked him? Ummmmm I'm confused
    July 20th, 2013 at 08:44am
  • kebssss

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    Aww. Thank you. That means so much. :)
    I wrote a new one though. entitled Not Something To Be Proud of. I imagined it as hetero but I cant do it. I don't know the female parts, only Alex and Jack's. So.... HAHA! G'night!
    July 19th, 2013 at 11:19am
  • Jalex_BaraSassKarth

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    Oh. My. God.
    THISISFUCKINGAMAZING!!!
    I should umm go to bed now..
    K byi ;)
    July 19th, 2013 at 11:08am
  • kebssss

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    @ unicornwillow
    i ran out of ideas... so i thought i make something up. XD i haven't seen or read a fic where alex is into this kinda stuff, so i thought i should, like, write one. Haha.

    I know.. but, i had to.. I'll make it up on part 2. dont worry! :) i hope you like it though.
    July 4th, 2013 at 12:38pm
  • unicornwillow

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    I dunno that Alex had a thing for paranormal activity. LOL -_-
    noooo, don't leave Jack's heart broken! :(
    July 4th, 2013 at 12:17pm
  • kebssss

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    @ pshhitshannah
    dude it's up now :)
    July 4th, 2013 at 10:46am
  • pshhitshannah

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    @ kebssss
    it's okay, i thought for a second it was operator error and i just didn't know how to work the internet or something haha
    July 3rd, 2013 at 04:55am
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    @ pshhitshannah
    oh my god i'm sorry i'm working on it. try it later and it will be there. i'm really sorry. Sad
    July 3rd, 2013 at 04:48am
  • pshhitshannah

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    sorry, but uhmmm i can't see the story, like it doesn't show up for me :( i wanna read it tho because i liked the last bit
    July 3rd, 2013 at 04:28am
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    @ DrunkTurtle
    Oh wow. Thank you! :) It really means a lot. Seriously. I'm happy you liked it. I know the incest part is somehow disturbing. haha. but i wont force people to read it though. Wink
    July 3rd, 2013 at 03:44am
  • RaisedByMusicc

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    Holy. Fucking. Shit. I... Oh my god!!! I fucking love this!!! Really amazing! You're a good writer.

    And incest? So many of those now. It's so weird, but they are so cute. I just can't get over the incest part. I don't understand it, cuz ya'know, but I can't wait to read it.
    July 2nd, 2013 at 03:19am
  • Vickyboo

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    @ kebssss
    Just continue off of what happened at the end
    June 30th, 2013 at 10:59pm
  • kebssss

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    @ Vickyboo
    I was actually thinking about that. :) what do you think should happen then? :)
    June 30th, 2013 at 08:02am
  • Vickyboo

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    You should continue this with a second part
    June 30th, 2013 at 07:43am