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jesus christ. (105)

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the way you write is gorgeous. I love choppy and the way you leave the reader questioning. Honestly, this is gorgeous. You're a really good writer. <3

January 2nd, 2014 at 08:38pm
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I think this was a very impactful drabble. I was constantly wondering why she was "alright" and the ending just tied it up nicely. Good job

July 22nd, 2013 at 04:38am

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