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  • LexDanger

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    In chapter ten, you dropped the name owen instead of river. At christmas day
    February 1st, 2014 at 11:23pm
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    ten, ypu dropped the name owen.instead of river. At christmas d
    February 1st, 2014 at 11:22pm
  • LexDanger

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    In chapter ten, ypu dropped the name owen.instead of river. At christmas day
    February 1st, 2014 at 11:21pm
  • LexDanger

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    In chapter ten, ypu dropped the name owen.instead of river. At christmas dsy
    February 1st, 2014 at 11:21pm
  • Killjoy Shadows

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    miss this story :P
    January 30th, 2014 at 04:25pm
  • Embracing Shadows

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    @ RavenArtist93
    Thank you :)

    We shall see... This story hasn't exactly gone the way I planned, damn thing wanted to be all sappy and cute instead of dramatic and challenging. I had this whole thing planned out... And it didn't happen. So we'll see.
    January 2nd, 2014 at 12:13am
  • RavenArtist93

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    I seriously never commented on this?
    I been reading this from the start and my lazy ass can't put a damn comment on things! xD

    This story is so cute.
    You picture River so perfectly, its so adorable xD
    Matt is cute for being nervous...and I hope things go well between the two :)
    January 2nd, 2014 at 12:06am
  • Embracing Shadows

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    @ AJM1
    Which chapter was it in? Because, quite honestly, I have no idea what chapter that line is from.
    December 31st, 2013 at 01:54am
  • A. J.

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    @ Embracing Shadows
    It's fine. Just wanted to let you know =)
    December 30th, 2013 at 11:46pm
  • Embracing Shadows

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    @ AJM1
    Originally, he was called Owen because I started this story before anyone knew what his name was. Apparently, when I switched it over after his name was announced (though apparently another magazine elsewhere called him Owen), I missed one lol.
    December 30th, 2013 at 06:32pm
  • A. J.

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    Love this so far! There's one thing tho. The boy's name is River, but in one sentence you called him Owen. [River pouted and Matt gave him a look, which instantly turned the little boy’s pout into a smile. Owen turned his attention back to his teacher.]
    Just thought you'd want to know to change it- I would want to know as a writer. Anyway, looking forward to delving into another Rhiannon/Matt love affair! Happy New Year
    December 30th, 2013 at 05:45pm
  • fiction246

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    I have probably said this a billion times but river is adorable :) I love this story so much!!! Can't wait for more :)
    December 30th, 2013 at 11:02am
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    River is too cute!
    December 30th, 2013 at 06:59am
  • mrsmshadz

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    Yeah that would be a plus.
    December 30th, 2013 at 03:52am
  • Embracing Shadows

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    @ mrsmshadz
    Yep. I write about them getting divorced a lot. Figured I would at least try make it as realistic as possible.
    December 30th, 2013 at 03:47am
  • mrsmshadz

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    Ahhh I see! Thank you for the fyi. Someone's done their homework :)
    December 30th, 2013 at 03:39am
  • RavenArtist93

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    This story is so amazing :')
    Matt's son is so cute! Mr. Green
    December 30th, 2013 at 01:28am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I just love this story :)
    December 30th, 2013 at 12:27am
  • Matt Sanders;

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    I can't wait to read more!! I can't wait to see wheret his goes and I know that Val is going to make everything hard, but Rhi doesn't deserve it, you know???
    December 29th, 2013 at 11:53pm
  • Embracing Shadows

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    @ mrsmshadz
    Divorces take a minimum of six months to be final in California, AFTER all the terms have been agreed to. The terms of the divorce have to be agreed upon before the finalization period goes into effect. And up until the spring, Valary was still fighting the terms. So now in July, which is a maximum of three months from when she stopped fighting while setting the terms, the divorce can't be final yet.
    December 29th, 2013 at 10:27pm