Closer. - Comments

OhmyGOD. This plated with both my heart and nether-regions like nothing has before. <333

Oh My God... I. Just. Can't. Q-Q This is perfect! I love it so-so much *^* You should write a longer one like this or something (just sayin' ^^"), 'cause it's just perfect <3 Oh and your writing style is beautiful & amazing c:
*loves*

@ enemies. oh my god, I... Thank you. Seriously. I can't believe this is even still getting readers/comments as I posted it earlier this year, but... Again, thank you for your kind feedback. It means a lot to me. :)

Your writing is simply perfect.
*cries on the floor*
Kthxbai. :D

@ SquiddyTheMouse thank you so much for your feedback! I've read back through it a couple of times and cringe a little at the grammatical errors I made >.< Much too fast typing on my end, not checking over as I write each paragraph, and the fact that there's no spell checker makes it harder to check as you go, which is annoying, haha, but other than that, thank you <3

This was gorgeous <3 a few things that could probably be touched up (and not in the way Hannibal touched Will) hehe
But other than a few grammatical errors, this is perfect <3 :)