Blood Drawn and Silken Pelts - Comments

Darker_Then_Light (100)

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PLEASE, feel free to leave a comment or two.. I hope you enjoy my story, and if you don't like it so far well then suck it.. I'm kidding.. Just tell what you don't like and I'll see what I can do..
I love you all my readers, and well, I hope you return the love.

August 5th, 2013 at 03:45am

Darker_Then_Light (100)

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@ PourquoiBella
Story is updated, and the background is now in sight..

August 1st, 2013 at 12:00am

PourquoiBella (100)

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@ Soul_Of_Darkness
Gotcha! I'll see how it goes.

July 30th, 2013 at 11:25pm

Darker_Then_Light (100)

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@ PourquoiBella
There will be in the next chapter... the last one was more of a may I else say, the development of the true story.. An undeniable lust between to characters destined for one another...

July 30th, 2013 at 06:20pm

PourquoiBella (100)

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I like this idea so far, but it feels a bit rushed - like it needs more character development/backstory.

July 30th, 2013 at 08:13am

Darker_Then_Light (100)

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@ CommanderCrim
The font is fixed, and layout changed. Please do read.. please..

July 30th, 2013 at 07:48am

Darker_Then_Light (100)

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@ CommanderCrim
I'm soooooooooo sorry, I was extremely tired when I did the layout.. I'll see if I can fix it soon..

July 28th, 2013 at 10:15am

CommanderCrim (100)

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This looks like a really good story, but the red font and background hurt my eyes, so it's hard to read :(

July 28th, 2013 at 09:34am