The Last Night - Comments

  • Corrupt_Perfection

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    Well Lovely, if the question is how long it had been since eating ANYTHING, it is a different answer than the last time he ate an actual meal. Either way it is at least two weeks since he had any nutrition willingly, besides that it is hard to guess since for all we know he could be surviving on the occasional piece of toast, a granola bar, or an apple just so his entire body doesn't shut down. He is still alive so he was at least eating SOMETHING every couple weeks. That was way over analized.
    August 9th, 2013 at 02:10am
  • beautiful creature

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    I think you need to stop putting yourself down chapter 4 was really good loved it and chapter 5 was even better. never execpted jack to do that and if i had to say when i thought the last time alex ate was i would say idk 10 months no one cares about him. anywas. thanks for updating so soon. BUT UPDATE AGAIN. YOU CANT LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT EVEN THOUGH IT WAS GOOD WAY TO END THAT CHAPTER. Very Happy
    August 9th, 2013 at 01:27am
  • Floortyeahx

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    This is great. I love you. And it's so sad but of course it gets better because all stories do right.. right?? Poor Alex:( And poor Jacky:(
    August 8th, 2013 at 10:48pm
  • SleeplessSymphony

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    Update: I kinda want to hug Jack too :(
    August 8th, 2013 at 09:39pm
  • SleeplessSymphony

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    Aww, poor Alex baby, I've just read two chapters but all I want is to hug him and never let go :( it's really good so far though :)
    August 8th, 2013 at 09:26pm
  • ivemovedon

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    @ beautiful creature
    omg you're my favorite c: I actually was worried things were moving too fast! I really appreciate your insight! I'll update again tomorrow!
    August 8th, 2013 at 09:19am
  • beautiful creature

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    NO COMMENTS?!?!?.....OH WELL ILL BE THE FIRST. I LOVE IT AND YOU SHOULD UPDATE SOON..... I LIKE HOW YOU MADE JACK A BULLY AND ALEX THE VICTIM. BECAUSE USUALLY IN JALEX FANFICTIONS. THEY HIT IT OFF LIKE THE FIRST DAY. AND I ALSO LIKED WHAT YOU DID WITH THEYRE HOME LIVES EVEN IF ITS SAD TO THINK OF JACK AND ALEX THAT WAY. WELL I THINK THIS IS GETTING TO LONG BUT I SIMPLY HAD TO TELL YOU WHY I LOVE THIS JALEX FANFIC.!!
    August 8th, 2013 at 08:45am