The Fear of Falling Apart - Comments

Awesome story. can't wait for an update.

Patrick's life sucks haha angry pete is funny though

Yeah and pissy Pete :) I love angry Pete haha but bad timing with Patrick

Goddamnit Pete. Now is not the time to go all emo in front of Patrick! Lol. But seriously, Im loving the story.

Angry emporor Pete is cute. I still feel so bad for Patrick, he's so terrified and I really do not blame him. I'm glad to see that Pete is not going to send Patrick off to his death, however I am scared for William too

Haha I really love gabes character! And poor patrick! At least he didn't go to the arena :) as someone who has studied Ancient Rome and Egypt for 4 years you guys have been doing a great job with painting the picture of emperor Pete :)

This just keeps getting better. I can't stand not seeing them meet yet, though.

I really like this :)

Aww patrick! I hope he doesn't end up in the arena!

I hope Pete can get Patrick out of that situation before anything really bad happens. And I'm actually curious to see what happens with the little boy. I just want to see if hes okay lol. Also how old is Patrick in this?

I love this! You both are excellent writers and this is quite original and exciting, just overall love it. Please update soon!

Ok just want to say first that I am so jealous you went to leeds. reading is 20 mins along the m4 from me yet I had to settle with watching bbc3's coverage grrr.

okay onto the story. this has to be one of the most imaginitive stories i've read and I am really enjoying it. It is very well written and emotions in it are very strong. well done

I agree I can't get enough of this fic :) can't wait for the next update already

I really hope you update this as soon as possible. I need to read more.

Awesome :)) I really love what you've done with Patrick's character. Keep it up!

This is amazing so far! Believe it or not I actually toyed with the idea of this except have patrick as emperor and him fall in love with a servant girl