Brighter Than the Sun - Comments

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I really loved this story. It was funny and cute, just everything I love in a story. Melody was a really likeable character. It was interesting to watch Patrice come to the conclusion that he was into her. Tyler would make that suggestion to make him jealous. The ending was super cute! The smut was well written, better than most smut. I just loved that you chose Patrice because I love him! I should be posting the winners this week! Good job! You should also continue this story

YES..continue with this story.

Yes you should continue the story because it is great!

Ok. I'm confused......you write an amazing chapter like that and the ask if you should continue? Hell yes!!! You should definitely continue:)

Great start!! I love Patrice!!