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  • Jayess

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    I'm glad that she didn't jilt her fiance at the altar. Ben was very selfish to tell her that he loved her, very selfish to kiss her. Sometimes love is holding your tongue. Love is thinking more about the feelings of the person you love, about their needs, more than your desires.
    September 9th, 2013 at 02:51am
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    Thanks! There was originally a very different ending but it didn't feel right so it changed. I guess this means I can write a sequel though. :)
    September 8th, 2013 at 05:20pm
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    Great story!
    September 8th, 2013 at 05:10pm
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