At Sunset - Comments

@ Queen of Obscene
Thank you! I'm super glad you enjoyed it!

@ Zacky Vengeance;
Awww!!! Thanks! I take suggestions! :) It just improves my writing for the best. I will make a mental note to clean that up and separate the text. Thanks for the feedback!

That was adorable! I could totally understand how she'd feel that way so soon after a break up and what have you- no wonder she decided to stay at home!
I love how passionate he can be- he has his moments in this story where the carnal side takes over, but yeah, I did love it! Just one piece of feedback- maybe try separating out the text. One long paragraph can be quite hard to read. But it's just a suggestion of course. Thank you for entering my contest!

Dude that was awesome. Super hot smut (: Best of luck!