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  • whatername12

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    UPDATE SOON this is wonderful write more dont leave me hanging
    July 16th, 2014 at 06:56pm
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    UPDATE SOON this is wonderful write more dont leave me hanging
    July 16th, 2014 at 06:56pm
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    UPDATE SOON this is wonderful write more dont leave me hanging
    July 16th, 2014 at 06:56pm
  • poison and blood

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    You are very skilled at writing, but your plot seems to be moving too fast. Perhaps that is why you aren't getting recognition. Take that into consideration when you start another story, work on character building as well as setting and you would have some very great stories! Let me know if you want any help, I don't bite! (:
    Despite what I said about its speed, you still have a very promising piece. Keep writing!
    September 4th, 2013 at 10:00pm
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