The Other Daughter of Ra's al Ghul - Comments

jaime.wwe80 (100)

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@ zabetheliza79
I was out of town for awhile but get to work on the stories asap

October 11th, 2013 at 05:21pm

zabetheliza79 (100)

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Still loving this story. You are missed.

October 7th, 2013 at 08:48pm

manda719 (100)

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Keep going it is a great start....I am hooked and it has only been a few chapters...I need to see where this goes

September 19th, 2013 at 08:17pm

M12798501R (100)

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It's no a great path keep going

September 17th, 2013 at 08:58pm

M12798501R (100)

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Keep Going its a great story ;) Hate talia

September 14th, 2013 at 02:09am

M12798501R (100)

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Poor Christina she loves bane and he is married with talia:( great chapter

September 11th, 2013 at 01:53am

zabetheliza79 (100)

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Good chapter. Curious to know if Tal and Bane are truly married. Waiting for update.

September 11th, 2013 at 01:13am

zabetheliza79 (100)

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I think the Spanish is authentic given the setting. I say anytime you can work on a second language go for it. Keep up the good work. I really enjoy the premise.

September 11th, 2013 at 01:00am

yolande (100)

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not a fan of the spanish being there but glad there are english subs. curious to see where this story leads too. great first chapter :)

September 9th, 2013 at 03:22pm

M12798501R (100)

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Yes you should;) cannot wait for bane and Christina interaction;)

September 8th, 2013 at 08:20am