Filled With Syn - Comments

Great story so far! I can't wait to read more updates! :)

@ Teardrops.
Aw, well thank you hun!

@ NeverWakeMeUp
Thanks for the comment! Hehe I'm waiting to see what all happens myself. Like I've mapped out some of what's to come but I like to be spontaneous too.

Loved this! I can't wait to see what Jamie comes up with and how Brian reacts. I'm wondering if it will take long for him to catch on or not.... Thanks for posting!

this is extremely entertaining, never thought i would enjoy because i dont really listen to avenged sevenfold. but great job love your writing style.

I can see how much you have improved with this story since reading your older stuff. Great job, really.

@ xMandiblesx
Your welcome

@ xSweet.Afterlifex
Yay!

@ xMandiblesx
Oka awesome!!!! but yeah as I said, I love this story. (I am addicted)

@ CrazyPebbles21
Thanks hun!

@ Xxzackysangel6661Xx
Muwahaha. You'll just have to wait and see.

@ xSweet.Afterlifex
Thanks doll! I hope to update it again after I update our story first.

@ Antidote.
Aw! Your comment made me cheese so big this morning! Thank you ever so much! I am so glad that I gave you the Brian feels again. He is rather Synful huh? Dude! I totally love putting Jimmy in stories. When he's in my stories and happy and cracking jokes, it makes the reality and pain of his passing a little easier. I have several stories with him in them. Actually most of my stories include him. I love Arin to death though too.

My older stories need a lot of work like grammar and placement wise but the concepts are still decent. You totally need to read this chapter where Jimmy and the main female character make pancakes while listening to Monster Mash.

Thanks for the dialogue comment too. I love dialogue lol as you probably noticed.

@ Ailurophile
Hehehe you'll just have to wait and see muwahaha! No seriously though, I'm going to try and update this again this week.

@ Clara.
Aw, thank you so much! I am pleased that you are enjoying the story. I like Jamie too because she's a character a lot of girls can relate to I think. Yeah Brian definitely has some emotional baggage going on. Thanks for the comments, love.

As always I enjoyed reading this, and I didn't feel like this was a filler love:) it was lengthy enough to enjoy.

I love Jamie as a character, she reminds me of must a bit and I think a bath was perfect for the crap she just went through.

And then poor Brian :( I'm so sorry for him :(

Personally I don't think Jimmy would care but that's just me.

Poor brian :( I wonder what jamie has up her sleeve.
Update soon, please! :)

I had to read all three chapters because you had me hooked on the little cliff hanger you had at the end of chapter one and then of course I couldn't just stop there. I have to say, you've reignited my Avenged Sevenfold spark. You got my Brian feels returning and I just had all these story ideas- so thank you for that!

I don't know how I have never taken to time out to read your stuff before- but lately I've had a reading funk and haven't read anything- but I adore your writing style. It's so well-written and the dialogue sounds real if you get me; like some people (including myself) struggle to move away from the monotone basic stuff that makes the characters all sound the same, but with Jamie and Brian, I could just picture the whole scene perfectly. I now want to go read all your other stuff and if this story is anything to go by, I won't be disappointed.

Oh and I must add, I love that Jimmy is in this. Although I accept his death in real life, in stories, I like to redesign his fate and have him alive and kicking. He always makes a story for me because his personality is just too big! I love that this story has him in it

I have no faults with this story. I shall now subscribe and recommend because I'm hooked. Update soon, yeah?

I love where this chapter went, it's amazing. I can not wait until the next one is out, but I know it'll be worth it so I will. This was just awesome!!! Keep it up love!

What does Jamie have planned? I can't wait to read more :)