The story was beautiful. I got this feeling at the end when we said the like children crying part, and it just made my heart flutter. I think you wrote this very well. Many people would have magically made Ash walk again, but you stuck with it and made it nicely fit into the story line. Exceptional writing as usual. I really enjoyed reading this.
IM SOBBING! That was really beautiful. I wish i had commented on this wonderful story more often, but this was perfect. I really enjoy your writing. I hope to read more of your stories.
I'm commenting this time around. Finally getting caught up! Wow! Great chapter, love, love, love this story and I loves the fluffiness of this chapter. So cute!