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  • GirlWithFlowerDress

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    @ achondro
    maybe the other chapters will be a little longer ... but for this i wanted it to end how i ended it :D there wouldn't be anything interesting happening in the movies ...
    but thank you :)
    October 9th, 2013 at 08:47pm
  • achondro

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    Its cute I like the idea just maybe try and lengthen the paragraphs a bit, like you could of gone on to describe their movie experience maybe or something.
    October 9th, 2013 at 03:49pm
  • mixtape-of-her-bands

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    daww...I'm not shipping merrikat though :P and short chapters is short :/
    October 7th, 2013 at 09:09pm
  • thegreathendowski

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    YESYESYESYESYES NUFF SAID!
    October 7th, 2013 at 08:45pm
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