Nos­tal­gia - Comments

@ SmilingScarlet
I love sass

Thank you deary

The amount of sass in this story has me...

PERFECTION!

I ACTUALLY QUITE LOVE THIS

The layout gives off the vibes of the story to me. Like, I don't know. I feel memories and nostalgia and all that. I like it.

AND I REALLY LOVE THE WRITING.

The bills stack up, but I haven't got the movie star face to pay them.

LIKE DAMN THAT ONE WAS GOOD. This whole letter is awesome and vindictive but in a subtle way and I hope it hurts whoever read it because wow

AND THE LAST LINE

OH MY GOD IT WAS JUST THE RIGHT AMOUNT OF SUCKER PUNCH

it was great!! loved this! rec'd for sure

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
@ poison and blood.
Thank you dears! I fixed the layout so it's easier to read

"then fuck you in advance"...that is so clever! I love that line! This was a really good piece, and I'm left wanting to know more. xx

My dear author,

first of all, I am totally in love with the layout and the summary. The layout compliments the mood of nostalgia and fits with the story's title nicely. We all know how it can be waiting and waiting for someone or something.

On to the drabble itself,
I'd suggest changing the text's color to white cause at the part where the background says nostalgia with the same color as the text, its hard to read.

It needs a slight editing but the feelings come across beautifully. The longing, the hope, the regret and the anger as well... It was a nice short piece.

Thanks for sharing this here.

~Marian.