I really love this! The description is beautiful, you can really picture what is happening inside your head.
The only concern that I have is that it seems a little bit choppy at parts. But I'm pretty sure that you meant it to be, with how fast-paced and action-filled this is.
I really love the idea behind it. It's really interesting. I can't wait to read more. Hope that you update soon!
The only concern that I have is that it seems a little bit choppy at parts. But I'm pretty sure that you meant it to be, with how fast-paced and action-filled this is.
I really love the idea behind it. It's really interesting. I can't wait to read more. Hope that you update soon!