All I Wanted Was You - Comments

  • Steffi3991

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    No no no no. Pleaaaaase zoey. Don't do anything stupid and when will you tell us who's the evil person setting up all the devilish things?
    And I hope jaimes and nadias plane will work!!!!
    October 25th, 2013 at 05:43am
  • livelaughlove_xo

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    No moving on! They need to get back together!
    October 25th, 2013 at 05:12am
  • uarley.

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    SUCH A CLIFFHANGER! lol this is such a great story! The suspense is killing me, though. I want to find out so bad what's going to happen. This is such a well written story, I love it!
    October 23rd, 2013 at 07:07am
  • ClowieDiamond

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    Omfg!!! This is getting intense! Did Tony make that entire thing up or is it actually true?!! I need more this story is amazing! Love it! :)
    October 22nd, 2013 at 11:13pm
  • Steffi3991

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    The chapter were they got married was just adorable and when they were 'foghting' about her growong a mustache and shaving her had too but the star wars part... it was amazing
    For the chapter where he woke up... I understand him in a way. But why wouldn't he ask her first if she was seeing someone else behind his back the whole time... and if her father told tony that or gave him in some way a clue... can I hurt him? I know it's ridiculous, but come on.... everyone loves zooey and tony together.... and I have nonidea why he doesn't believe her... and if it's someone else than her father can you hurt that person too???? Thank you
    October 22nd, 2013 at 04:40pm
  • Steffi3991

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    If it wasn't me sitting in a train station drinking coke I would be at home in my room crying and panicking for the actions in this chapter.
    I find it amazing how they treated each other in the last chapter and at the beginning of this one and FINALLY she had the nerves to stand up forbher own and tell the ass of her father that she can do this on her own but the end.... I will re-read it at home and cry my eyes out. I will write more when I'm home.
    October 22nd, 2013 at 01:35pm
  • ClowieDiamond

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    This story is amazing and I can't wait for you to update :)
    October 20th, 2013 at 10:29pm
  • uarley.

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    I'm really glad I waited to comment on chapter three, because now I'm feeling sad and just the total opposite of my last comment. Cry This was written so beautifully. Their night together was so sweet and romantic and then their next morning just made me want to hug Tony! You made it so clear just how much he really loved her and it was awful to see him turned down!

    When Vic called Zooey, the chapter took a turn I really wasn't expecting it to. Now I'm feeling so anxious for when Tony wakes up, I can't wait to see what happens!
    October 19th, 2013 at 07:38pm
  • uarley.

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    You updated so fast! I love it!

    So far, I've only read chapter two, but I'll comment on chapter three later. I just had to say that two was so cute and funny! I loved the part where they were arguing over who should knock on the door! I also laughed when Tony got into the car with his lightsaber and Mike was being a jerk to him. Those were my two favorite parts, but the whole chapter had me smiling and giggling to myself!
    October 19th, 2013 at 07:15pm
  • Jay.B

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    I really enjoy reading this. So heart breaking but, I know that Zoey and Tony's relationship will get better. Love this! Cant wait for more!
    October 19th, 2013 at 06:04pm
  • monioli

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    this is by far one of the best stories I've read. I'm actually emotional right now after reading this. Soooooo good :)
    October 19th, 2013 at 04:52pm
  • livelaughlove_xo

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    I love this story! It's so different than others I've read. I do really like the idea of the flashbacks. I can't wait for more!
    October 19th, 2013 at 04:08pm
  • Steffi3991

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    This story is so much fun. Well the flashback. Also the first chapter...
    Gotta say I hate vinnie (her dad)...
    More please ;)
    October 18th, 2013 at 02:21pm
  • uarley.

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    I'm so excited to see where this story goes! Its amazingly written and different from most of the other stories on here! I can't wait for the next chapter!
    October 18th, 2013 at 02:03am
  • GingerLove-Palace

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    This is an amazing idea!! I love it :)
    October 17th, 2013 at 07:23pm
  • monioli

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    LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THIS! Can't wait to read more!
    October 17th, 2013 at 05:56pm