Criticize the Lullaby - Comments

@ OfMiceAndKayla
But it's so good! Hahahaha

@ Libeeyo
Haha oh my gosh but I just did last night love xD

Aw so good! Please update soon

@ inamorta
Oh my gosh I didn't think I'd get feedback this soon after updating thank you! (I may or may not update tomorrow but you know I'm bad for that I'm just gonna leave it at maybe and yeah woo)

ah that was really good, im so ready for the next update!!!

@ aashbyinmypants
Oh........ Oh my I'm sorry what oh I... I'm sorry. It's just gonna get worse... I'm sorry.

THIS HURTS MY HEARt

Alan stop being a vagina and opEN YOUR EYES

ISTG IF WITHRR OF THEM HURT THEMSELFS AGAIN PLEASE GOD NO.

@ zozom19
Oh my gosh I'm glad you do c:

I love this so much

I love this so much

@ OfMiceAndKayla
Okay! Yay! :)

@ Libeeyo
Oh my /u\ thank you I'm thinking a new chapter'll be up this week, hoping for in the next few days, no promises, it's gonna be a good one ahaha(;

@ OfMiceAndKayla
Yes it's so good! Haha :)

@ Libeeyo
In the process of writing the next chapter! I'm super excited to be writing this again, I'm super glad you liked what I have so far :D

More please!!!!