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  • anomalyannie

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    @ everdeen
    thank you! :) if you have time, check out my other story Infinity Street - I've had it sitting around for a while now and decided to revamp it, it definitely circles on John meeting such girl but with a different twist :)
    November 3rd, 2013 at 10:37am
  • everdeen

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    I know it's a one-shot, but (if you have time) could you write a sequel? Like, he meets a kind girl, who is totally his other half (and everyone tells him this), who cares about him and is willing to love him... YET he is stuck in the past, refusing to move on and letting go the pain. So eventually she goes away and he realize that he was being "the Summer" this time, he loves her (we start to appreciate the value of something after we lose it) and wants to get her back.
    Or don't. But I thought about this sequel in my head and I'd be glad to read it haha sorry
    November 3rd, 2013 at 01:22am
  • everdeen

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    Wow! Just... Wow. Really really really good. I won't say poor John, because as in 500 days of summer (I have to compare, sorry) he was warned that things had a big chance to not end like he wanted to, he would have his heart broken, yet he thought he could change the "i-don't-believe-in-love" girl. He can't.
    November 3rd, 2013 at 01:21am