Manic Pixie Dream Girl - Comments

lackadaisicalify (100)

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Your prose is gorgeous and I love the aspect of repetition: Girls like her don't come to group. I could get lost in this and it's barely just begun.

March 29th, 2014 at 04:38pm

so unintelligent; (100)

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Holy shit, I love this.

January 6th, 2014 at 02:20am

The Real Mitt Romney (250)

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There are no stars, but I can see the red flicker of a commercial airplane scuttling across the cloud-padded sky like a demonic scarlet eye winking down at me.

I do believe I've fallen in love with a sentence.

December 18th, 2013 at 08:33pm

slumflower (100)

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Wow.
I love this a lot so far! It's really poetic and easy-flowing and I love the way you started off. It's captivating and I'm already in love with the way you're writing this. Also, Stella Artois sounds like a badass.

November 3rd, 2013 at 02:01pm