You're Magic - Comments

Just reread all of this. In major love with this story

I love them and I love this! I hope you finish it up soon...it's killing me!!

They are beyond cute.

I just wanna say I love the way Pete and Evelyn talk to each other. it's hard to explain but you craft the dialogue in a way that sounds like how a real life couple would speak to each other and I love it <333

also the bit about the VH1 dating show OMG CAN YOU IMAGINE THAT?? I'M LAUGHING SO HARD JUST PICTURING HIM AND ALL THE GIRLS GETTING INTO FIGHTS OVER HIM OMGGG

I just cant. I adore them. <3

"I kiss him hard on the mouth and in a way it's sort of full of hate, but at the same time I feel like it's all I can do to feel okay; to feel Pete's lips on mine and remind myself of everything I love about him, even when I'm dreaming of tearing him apart."

ugh that part had me like <3____<3. I just love the way this story is written. the present tense always makes it sound so poetic and I love the way you write their relationship and how their past aggressions are starting to surface after so long. I really hope they don't make the same mistakes again because I really want them to make it through this!

oh yeah and I really like how the thing with Ashlee was finally revealed, because I always wondered why she didn't want Pete to talk to Evelyn. I never would've expected it to happen like that, but it makes so much sense.

Oh wow...

@ milesandmaisy
Thanks so much omg I'm really happy people like this story! I always take forget to update so I'm going to try to change that! Thank you so much again!!!!

I LOVE THIS!!!

I LOVE THIS!!!

@ chynnablueink
OMFG YES IT WAS ON QUIZILLA THATS HILARIOUS OMG. But yes omg it was on Quizilla like a million years ago so I'm trying to redo it!

I'VE TOTALLY READ THIS BEFORE

You say it used to be on Quizilla??

I'm on Chapter Two and thinking 'Man, this sounds familiar' and then it hit Evelyn tweeting 'let's get weird' and I'm like DAMN I'VE DEFINITELY READ THIS BEFORE. How weird is that?!

(It's AWESOME, by the way.)

Aaaah girly! This chapter was so sweet. I legit think Pete n Eve are so sweet together. Love love love them <3

Brilliant! I wonder if she will have a fling with Patrick? Can't wait for the next update :)

"I let it drop and hope that he hasn't spent the past hour and a half thinking about pizza or something"

omfg that is so Pete though, thinking about pizza during sex.

I have a feeling things are going to go wrong when he leaves, I really hope I'm not right

@ Ali Cat
Yay I look forward to it!

@ OvercastKidd
Thank you!!! I'm hopefully going to update this story this week :DDD

I absolutely LOVE this

I absolutely LOVE this

@ Ali Cat
I didn't know you wrote the other Patrick story! I have absolutely no idea what to expect so anything you decide to do will be amazing!