Worth the Wait - Comments

@ catharsis.
Okay... Thanks? I, uhm, didn't really expect such constructive criticism.. But thank you. I'll go back through and check it. Have a nice day.

You've portrayed their relationship very well; it's nice that they're in an established relationship but you can still make it interesting.

You use ellipses a lot, and I would suggest reading through and determine if those are necessary all the time, because they disrupt the flow when used excessively.

You've portrayed their relationship very well; it's nice that they're in an established relationship but you can still make it interesting.

You use ellipses a lot, and I would suggest reading through and determine if those are necessary all the time, because they disrupt the flow when used excessively.

You've portrayed their relationship very well; it's nice that they're in an established relationship but you can still make it interesting.

You use ellipses a lot, and I would suggest reading through and determine if those are necessary all the time, because they disrupt the flow when used excessively.

@ JennaMathews143
Aww thank you! I love you now lol

I love this! Write more, write more! <3 I'm definitely recommending this to my readers.