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@ Bara-Baby
There will be a sequel. Do not worry, okay? I just have to figure out how to start the damn thing and then it will be up and running

PLEASE write a sequel!!!! <3

so in love!!!! please write more or a sequal!!!!

@ McLover
Lol that actually makes really good sense, but then again I just started reading it and I haven't really read a lot of Harry soo yea. But thanks I appreciate your perspective lol

@ McCann_Turner he's just really scared because he's never felt this way about anyone and he can't seem to come to terms with that. Due to his own insecurities within himself he feels he is incapable of properly loving Lauren. So, in short, he does have issues lol

Harry has some legit issues!

This was such a great chapter!!

Love it!

@ McLover
Which is probably what i love most about it because it's not super heavy slave/master thing but more realistic at least for a guy like Harry and then on top of all that he's still sweet and caring which I've found isn't easy to do

@ Forgetful-Insomniacs
You have honestly just made my day!! This is the most amazing feedback. I don't really see Harry as the "heavy" type. Like sure, he can be dominant, but his main goal is to make sure that his significant other is taken care of. Sexually or otherwise. And he isn't into the slave/master thing. He can be dominant on the bedroom, which Lauren enjoys, but he doesn't try to dominate her every move or thought. He respects her and her opinions.

Whoa that was NOT what i was expecting but i like it i haven't read a story like this in soooo long now i wanna go back and read the best story ever in the history of everness...ok maybe not but still. Anywho this story is rather amazing and not as heavy as others try to(unsuccessfully)pass off this captures pretty much the only way i could ever imagine Harry as a dominant which is slightly hot and oddly enough it seems you have this worked out perfectly with the combination of these subjects(Harry and bdsm) i am definitely hoping for more

I loved the update! I am so god they told their friends, I hope their relationship continues to progress nicely. Post more soon!

I loved the update. I can't wait to see what happens between these two next. Post more soon.

my god I love this book

In two days this story would be up for a full year. Proud of u babe! Keep going!

Looking forward to the next chapter!!!

Goood to see u updating again. Loved it.

Oh dear sweet tap dancing baby Jesus this is good! I can't wait to see what will happen to Lauren!!!!!! Update again soon please!

Oh gosh this was so intense, poor little Lauren haha I can't wait to see what will happen next!

Yay you updated! I was so happy to see your update, what's Harry gonna do to her! I know how it is when you need that slight push and then someone comments and your like I need to update haha :) Great chapter, I look forward to the rest!