A Prison of the Mind - Comments

You're fine. Take your time. The best writing is not to be rushed.

Glad to hear it, originally it was a story I started while bored in English class a year ago. This is further than I ever got back then already just with chapter 2 so I'm sorry if I'm a bit slow at continuing it.

I like this. It's really well written, and I love suspense. I'll be reading this. Can't wait for more.