Bourbon and Ray-Bans - Comments

@ MissaVengeance
I'm set on a sequel and excited to get started.

@ AkaraSoma
I love the apartment idea as well. It'll happen one day!

continue!

OMG, I luv it. U have to continue with this story. To good to stop.

continue!!!!!

...That's too sudden. You started into drama with Cecilia, and then immediately cut to Norman professing his love in photographs. Where's the journey of Brodie growing a pair and telling Norman her feelings? Where's the revelation that Norman had loved her all along, but didn't know how to voice it to her properly? Where's the strive of Norman? Where was Norman's point of view?!? This should have at least reached 30 chapters or more if you wrote it out properly.

I read a 100 chapter FrostIron that was more satisfying than that ending!

I'm not trying to be the Naggy Nun here, but I'm kinda appalled. I'm the whole deer-in-headlights right now...jaw dropped, eyes widened wondering why I'm reading about (a very beautiful ending for the right time) a scene that should be at the ending of the story not at the climax of the story before realizing we are, indeed, at the end of the story.

I've said my peace -puts hands up- it's your decision in the end.

Also they are finally together and she waited 3/4 years to hear him say those words, it cant just end there. I really really really hope you continue with this one. One of the best Norman Reedus fan fiction I have read

Oh my god I really loved this story wish it would go on for ever. I think you should carry on with this one. I know I would adore it :)

Finally!! Loved this so much! Both ideas sound great, you write so well I'd be happy with whichever you do

Continue continue continue continue continue continue!!!!!!! I loved this soooo much... you can't stop here they're finally together! This is one of the best Norman fanfics I've ever read on her... Plz plz plz plz goooo on! You must go on!

WHAAAAT? NOOOO. You can't end it here. i mean it's a perfect ending but...it felt so short :( We never actually got to see them together *sigh* But I loved it nonetheless so great job! Please write another story thogh...lol doesn't have to be a sequel or anything...just..more norman :p

@ LadyHera
You certainly did not disappoint! I did let out a rather loud "finally".
Absolutely adored it. I must read more of your stories!

So good, sequel PLEASE !!!

Both ideas sound great, but I love the apartment idea :3

@ captain jackson.
Well thank you for taking the time to comment. I'm glad you're enjoying and hope you won't be disappointed with what happens next!

@ SuckerInA3Piece
Your comment was so sweet. Last part coming soon!

@ breaking faces
Thank you so much! The next part has just been finished. Gotta do a little polishing and it'll go up!

@ AkaraSoma
I try to think about dating a 54 year old and it's strange, but I can't honestly say I would never do it. However, 20 is almost too young for anyone who isn't 20...lol. Hope you have a happy birthday soon. My 30th is right around the corner in February.

Wow okay. I normally don't comment stories, but this is fantastic. I haven't been on mibba for a long time and this is the first story I have read since I've been back and just wow. I adore this story. Well done my dear

I stop whatever I'm doing as soon as I get an update, please post more quickly I'm anxious to see what happens at the show! Begging for more ASAP!