Limerence - Comments

Sooo amazing and descriptive! I loved it. :)

Like kea.angel said, this is a cute drabble. I can totally see the scene happening and my mind and I can't help but squeal at the adorableness of it. The details are clear as well as the flow. Although this sentence disrupted it a little bit: I could smell the cigarettes on your breath. Besides that, it's practically perfect! Good job!

This was such a cute drabble. The descriptions are so clear I can easily see exactly what's going on, and I can definitely feel the limerence when they kiss. Nice work!

I love this drabble so much that I'm going to feature it in my drabble column in the Mibba Magazine