I’ve not read anything these good in ages, plus I agree the pairing is original and I like how you’ve went back to their school days. It’s a really cool idea :)
This is something new, you never see a fanfiction between these two and I'm interested to see where it's going. I know I said I would only read one chapter, but you've caught my interest so I read both! I hope to see more of this soon because I'm a huge fan of Harry Potter and this is one of those ships you dodnt know you wanted until it was a reality.
One thing I did immediately notice, in the third paragraph of chapter two where Tom is talking about Bellas hair, you forgot the word hair. It's missing in the second sentence of the third paragraph. I was obviously still able to tell what you were saying, but I thought you'd want to know it was missing