Again, I started reading this because of your comment of my blog I've only read up to chapter four so far, but I think this story is very cute! You both did a good job of writing Quinn's boyfriend's character - he came across as a real asshole, which I think was your intention.
So yeah, this story had great characterisation! A little more visual description of surroundings wouldn't hurt, but apart from that, this is a brilliant story! Nice work
I had been reading this and meant to comment, and then I saw the update and AH. I think this is supppeerr cute and I really love the idea you have so far and the layout is so cute. :D ah I love this.
Mel and Harry and Quinn and Lou and ughhhhhhhhh
I need more