I did consider rewriting the entire thing, but I don't have enough time on my hands with a full time job and taking class. I am editing it the best I can, though! I may go back and rewrite certain parts to improve it.
Have you ever thought about going back and rewriting this? Fixing evrything like the plot holes and having things make a bit more sense? I really like the story but with the plot holes its getting really confusing and just frusterating sometimes lol
The last two chapters are the same in case you did not realize, but i am so looking forward to the next chapter! But how can she be in love with him if they've never met?
I want to read more!!! Please update! I love your story so far! I also love your main character. I think it might be a good idea later in the story to try some POVs in Rustan's.