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  • sweet420

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    Update soon please!! I'm dying to read more
    January 5th, 2015 at 04:55am
  • break.my.bones

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    I did consider rewriting the entire thing, but I don't have enough time on my hands with a full time job and taking class. I am editing it the best I can, though! I may go back and rewrite certain parts to improve it.
    December 25th, 2014 at 03:13pm
  • Erin.Grace.

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    Have you ever thought about going back and rewriting this? Fixing evrything like the plot holes and having things make a bit more sense?
    I really like the story but with the plot holes its getting really confusing and just frusterating sometimes lol
    December 25th, 2014 at 03:07am
  • sweet420

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    Love this story!! Update soon!!
    December 23rd, 2014 at 04:12pm
  • MissyPrissy

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    Awww... Crap!!! I really liked Rustan!!! WHY?!?! I hope she doesn't die or something like that...
    December 22nd, 2014 at 03:30am
  • ambird96

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    WTH I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT :O
    December 20th, 2014 at 04:34pm
  • go.effin.nuts

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    Noooooooo. I love Rustan
    December 20th, 2014 at 04:42am
  • kailixx

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    um holy shit that was unexpected
    December 20th, 2014 at 04:19am
  • ambird96

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    The last two chapters are the same in case you did not realize, but i am so looking forward to the next chapter! But how can she be in love with him if they've never met?
    December 19th, 2014 at 12:59am
  • MissyPrissy

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    I loved the update! I can't wait to see what happens!
    December 18th, 2014 at 10:34pm
  • sweetpea420

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    Chapters 16 and 17 are the same. Idk if that was on purpose or accident but .... Just so you known otherwise I love this story.
    December 18th, 2014 at 08:18pm
  • sweet420

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    keep updating, this story is great!!
    i love the way you create the picture, i can see it.
    update soon!!
    December 18th, 2014 at 05:12am
  • Forgetful-Insomniacs

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    Ooooooh they just went SUPER purple
    December 14th, 2014 at 03:38am
  • kailixx

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    i can't believe i've never commented before. but ugh rustan too perfect
    December 13th, 2014 at 12:12am
  • ambird96

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    oh *$#^*$!%@ !!!! What is going to happen now..i wish i could just read this whole thing and it never end hahaha
    December 12th, 2014 at 07:16pm
  • ambird96

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    Totally loved the last chapter! It had me rolling! Cant wait for another update or two :P
    December 11th, 2014 at 09:07pm
  • XDementedLoveX

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    Keep this one up please!! =D
    November 29th, 2014 at 08:42am
  • JamieJo

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    Ah! Another suspenseful ending!!! Now what is she going to do D:
    November 29th, 2014 at 07:24am
  • JamieJo

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    Can't wait to read more!!!!
    November 23rd, 2014 at 12:35am
  • MissyPrissy

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    I want to read more!!! Please update! I love your story so far! I also love your main character. I think it might be a good idea later in the story to try some POVs in Rustan's.
    November 8th, 2014 at 02:14am