Very good. Arya and Bran's parts were my favourite, but Jon's really takes the cake with that last line. Such an interesting concept and you pulled it off so well.
June 30th, 2014 at 02:18pm
Firstly; Dat layout omgawh. I am seriously jealous of it - how dare you make something so great :O
Okay - onto the actual piece ^.^
I love that this is done in thought trains, it's wicked! I havent read anything like this before- gotta say that I like it alot.
That last line though was my favourite. "The White Walkers are what the North should truly remember."
^ That is so true. Brilliant stuff :D
