Fifty Shades of John. - Comments, page 2

whatsinalifetime (100)

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Love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

March 28th, 2014 at 04:22am

cindyrb12d (100)

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@ ediemarieee
Comin right up!

March 27th, 2014 at 01:43am

ediemarieee (100)

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Any updates today?

March 27th, 2014 at 01:11am

ediemarieee (100)

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Hi! I read the story before and I love it just as much as I did then. I love that you're updating to frequently! I'm so happy your brought it back

March 26th, 2014 at 07:53am

brunarotterdam (100)

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HE IS A CONTROL FREAK AND I LOVE IT.

March 26th, 2014 at 04:07am

cindyrb12d (100)

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@ m-attie
I actually cant really change the layout because I dont have access to a computer (I do everything from my iPad) so I dont know if it would let me. I can try! And about the spacing, what in particular would you like me to change?
I will consider the extra chapter though. Thank you so much for reading <3

March 24th, 2014 at 09:14pm

m-attie (100)

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Yes, extra chapter, please. Even if I already read this story and the sequel too.

Don't get me wrong but... have you thought about a new layout or something? And, you know, about um, spacing between paragraphs? It'd be easier to read. But that's just my opinin.

Anyway, keep writing <3

March 24th, 2014 at 08:58pm

ediemarieee (100)

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I love it! Update soon!

March 23rd, 2014 at 09:40pm

itsalsoallineed (100)

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Please update this all the time

March 23rd, 2014 at 05:22am