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  • dogandbutterfly

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    Good, she's done with Brady. Who is hopefully also done with her. Now onto life with James more involved. Smile

    I agree, your writing is great. Keep it up! Wink
    May 23rd, 2014 at 10:54pm
  • Kenarik

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    Woo! Now she knows he means business! Now to hope that she finds her backbone and tells the truth at the hospital. >< Go Anna!
    May 23rd, 2014 at 10:38pm
  • bxgurl95

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    Wow SOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOO many feels in that chapter. I hate thy she got hurt but how you juxtapose that with James coming to save the day. I really can't wait to see where this goes and how it unfolds. Just simply amazing, and how nice of you to shout us out :)
    May 23rd, 2014 at 09:45pm
  • Lindenitis

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    This is definitely my new favorite fic!!! It's original and your writing is awesome!
    May 23rd, 2014 at 07:18pm
  • sportsfanatic19

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    I cannot explain how much I love this story! I really, really hope James and Anna get together and stay together! Please update again soon!!
    May 23rd, 2014 at 07:06pm
  • LizLikeWoe

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    I'm subscribed to almost all of your stories, but this one is definitely my favorite. I don't know what it is about it, but I love it. You're such a talented writer! Can't wait to see where this goes, keep it up!
    May 23rd, 2014 at 06:43pm
  • LizLikeWoe

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    I'm subscribed to almost all of your stories, but this one is definitely my favorite. I don't know what it is about it, but I love it. You're such a talented writer! Can't wait to see where this goes, keep it up!
    May 23rd, 2014 at 06:42pm
  • Thatmom

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    Glad she had the courage to break it off. He's such a jerk!!
    May 23rd, 2014 at 06:29pm
  • Kenarik

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    That wasn't long... I've written long chapters. Like 8-9 THOUSAND word chapters. This was perfect.

    Yes James, be the samaritan we all know you are. Be prepared though, you may need back up once things get going!
    May 23rd, 2014 at 07:04am
  • Sidster87

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    Awesome chapter and hope thar James will kick Brady's ass soon
    May 23rd, 2014 at 01:21am
  • AmericanIcePrincess

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    I loved this chapter. Sitting on the trunk and stargazing is something I do so I felt like I had a personal connection with that part. I'm so glad James is there for her. I wish everyone had a friend like Skylar. Smile
    May 22nd, 2014 at 07:23pm
  • dogandbutterfly

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    Yay, another update! Yes, let's hope that it's in the open now and she'll have the strength to leave Brady. What a jerk. At least she has James!
    May 22nd, 2014 at 03:00pm
  • NorthernBelle

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    Wow, I understand that instant connection you can have with someone and even if it doesn't go far at first. It's so overwhelming. I get that is how they feel. Anna is so overwhelmed with what is happening between her and Brady, then James shows up and is the another fly in the ointment. But he's gonna be the good fly in the ointment.
    May 22nd, 2014 at 08:36am
  • realdeal18

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    Finally got all caught up! I love love this story! I hate to get to the end of the chapter! I love how protective and sweet James is being! I love Skylar taking care of her! I hope she gets away from Brady ASAP! Before he really hurts her! Move out and dump his ass! Can't wait for more! Great job and great writing! Smile
    May 22nd, 2014 at 07:41am
  • dreamerforever

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    Oh my God. That last line! And I can't help but love James for really being a huge shoulder to lean on.
    May 22nd, 2014 at 05:33am
  • katiexlee

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    Great update! I love how James cares so much about her even though he hasn't known her for very long. Skylar seems like such a great friend. I love how she stayed up to make sure Anna was safe. Can't wait for the next update!
    May 22nd, 2014 at 05:25am
  • bxgurl95

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    This was a great chapter a lot happened and informed a lot for upcoming events. I love decry minute of it. I love how Skylar has turned into a mother hen and she still is herself and I love her relationship with James and Jesus I want them to get it on already lol ;)
    Literally can't wait for more!!
    And I get so lost in the story that by the time I reach the bottom I try to keep scrolling. Not too long AT ALL. You've created such a beautiful and captivating setting for their lives to unfold.
    May 22nd, 2014 at 05:22am
  • Thatmom

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    I feel so bad for Anna:(
    May 22nd, 2014 at 04:29am
  • Hello.Love0588

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    I think James should take up a second job as a detective lmao we've got a sherlock over here! I say Anna just moves in with James come on!
    May 22nd, 2014 at 03:17am
  • Dixon-Darling.

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    You say the chapters are long, I say they end too soon... Hahaha, but seriously, I fucking love this story so damn much. If you felt like, ya know, posting the next two chapters I would completely support that decision. I love your writing so much and today I went through and read everything of yours that in not already subscribed to. This one is my favorite, which is funny because I absolutely ADORE Jonathan Toews and your story with him.

    Keep up the wonderful amazing work. <3
    May 22nd, 2014 at 02:42am