Torn - Comments

Good, she's done with Brady. Who is hopefully also done with her. Now onto life with James more involved.

I agree, your writing is great. Keep it up!

Woo! Now she knows he means business! Now to hope that she finds her backbone and tells the truth at the hospital. >< Go Anna!

Wow SOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOO many feels in that chapter. I hate thy she got hurt but how you juxtapose that with James coming to save the day. I really can't wait to see where this goes and how it unfolds. Just simply amazing, and how nice of you to shout us out :)

This is definitely my new favorite fic!!! It's original and your writing is awesome!

I cannot explain how much I love this story! I really, really hope James and Anna get together and stay together! Please update again soon!!

I'm subscribed to almost all of your stories, but this one is definitely my favorite. I don't know what it is about it, but I love it. You're such a talented writer! Can't wait to see where this goes, keep it up!

I'm subscribed to almost all of your stories, but this one is definitely my favorite. I don't know what it is about it, but I love it. You're such a talented writer! Can't wait to see where this goes, keep it up!

Glad she had the courage to break it off. He's such a jerk!!

That wasn't long... I've written long chapters. Like 8-9 THOUSAND word chapters. This was perfect.

Yes James, be the samaritan we all know you are. Be prepared though, you may need back up once things get going!

Awesome chapter and hope thar James will kick Brady's ass soon

I loved this chapter. Sitting on the trunk and stargazing is something I do so I felt like I had a personal connection with that part. I'm so glad James is there for her. I wish everyone had a friend like Skylar.

Yay, another update! Yes, let's hope that it's in the open now and she'll have the strength to leave Brady. What a jerk. At least she has James!

Wow, I understand that instant connection you can have with someone and even if it doesn't go far at first. It's so overwhelming. I get that is how they feel. Anna is so overwhelmed with what is happening between her and Brady, then James shows up and is the another fly in the ointment. But he's gonna be the good fly in the ointment.

Finally got all caught up! I love love this story! I hate to get to the end of the chapter! I love how protective and sweet James is being! I love Skylar taking care of her! I hope she gets away from Brady ASAP! Before he really hurts her! Move out and dump his ass! Can't wait for more! Great job and great writing!

Oh my God. That last line! And I can't help but love James for really being a huge shoulder to lean on.

Great update! I love how James cares so much about her even though he hasn't known her for very long. Skylar seems like such a great friend. I love how she stayed up to make sure Anna was safe. Can't wait for the next update!

This was a great chapter a lot happened and informed a lot for upcoming events. I love decry minute of it. I love how Skylar has turned into a mother hen and she still is herself and I love her relationship with James and Jesus I want them to get it on already lol ;)
Literally can't wait for more!!
And I get so lost in the story that by the time I reach the bottom I try to keep scrolling. Not too long AT ALL. You've created such a beautiful and captivating setting for their lives to unfold.

I feel so bad for Anna:(

I think James should take up a second job as a detective lmao we've got a sherlock over here! I say Anna just moves in with James come on!

You say the chapters are long, I say they end too soon... Hahaha, but seriously, I fucking love this story so damn much. If you felt like, ya know, posting the next two chapters I would completely support that decision. I love your writing so much and today I went through and read everything of yours that in not already subscribed to. This one is my favorite, which is funny because I absolutely ADORE Jonathan Toews and your story with him.

Keep up the wonderful amazing work. <3