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  • foxfan1992

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    Heh, at first I wasn't quite sure what to expect when I opened this. As I mostly write stories about children I guess I was expecting it to be a 'first day of school' thing. Then I thought... is it a wedding? Then as it turns out it was a 'first day of school' after all, but from a much different point of view.

    I liked it, it really made me think as to what was the story actually telling me? :D
    April 6th, 2014 at 05:41am
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    @ Rachel-Marie

    It was meant to be like that. I'm really into semi twist endings. Like, from the first couple lines it may seem like one thing. But the rest points to another(:

    I'm really glad you liked it. Mr. Green
    April 4th, 2014 at 04:29am
  • Rachel-Marie

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    From the title, I assumed it was a wedding and even as I was reading it, I still thought it was for a wedding haha maybe I'm just tired! I don't know if you meant for it to be that way.

    But either way, I liked it! The ending was cute(:
    April 4th, 2014 at 04:03am
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