Mystic Superstition - Comments

@ regulargal
thank you that really means a lot, we will have to update soon!

This is a story i hope never ends! Keep it up yall are great.

@ Bonnie Parker;
Thank you very much!
We should be updating soon!

Amazing. I really like this. I haven't watched Supernatural in forever, but I love this story!

I'm not going to lie I've kind of gotten bored with Supernatural but that didn't stop me from liking what I read. I like stories where more than one person knows what's going on and people and don't just think a person is crazy until it's too late and it seems like that's what it's going on here. I don't have to wonder how Sam or Dean are brought in just when they're going to show up.

This was nice, good job.

However, I found a few mistakes

The sentence that says

Though we came from two different schools, my cousin Surya and I have always dreamed of going to the same school and college was that very opportunity we were hoping for.

I think you meant

Though we came from two different schools, my cousin Surya and I have always dreamed of going to the same school and college. It was that very opportunity we were hoping for.

Next

we were getting away from all the high school drama and the things and people holding us back. We were living on campus with our new found friend and roommate Corette Noita, who was an absolute amazing person.

Should be

we were getting away from all the high school drama, things and people holding us back. We were living on campus with our new found friend and roommate Corette Noita, who was an absolutely amazing person.

The story looks really cool and interesting. I just have to say that there needs to be spaces between the paragraphs, as it makes it kind of hard to read when it's a wall of text like this. I keep losing my place. Still, it's a pretty good story from what I've read so far. There are minor errors here and there, but nothing major from what I saw. In the prologue there is a line that I feel could be reworded.

'All things could not go wrong from here...' Maybe say something like 'Nothing could go wrong from here on...', as it feels kind of awkward how it is now in my opinion.

Usually I'm not a huge fan of prologues like this; they tend to feel as though they belong in the summary. This one turned out alright, though. I'm interested in seeing what happens next to the characters and seeing them develop.

Elves. Who would've thought those guys existed? Very nicely done on both chapters.

With the direction this story is going so far I honestly can say it has been amazing so far. I really cannot wait to see what you have up next.

There are so much to these chapters but I love what happens in every one. Great job.

That, Was Just, Wow.
There are really no words to describe what I have just read. Jeez...since I have no words to say I will say this, the new case sounds interesting and you all did an amazing job.

There was very much fluff in this I loved it. Nicely done. Can't wait for the next case.

@ Total Nightmare
Haha i'm glad to get this response :3 We are going to be giving Surya and Sam some loving soon cause they haven't gotten very much and that needs to change!

@ rockyhorror052008
I'm glad you are still here! And yeah I can completely understand that for sure!

There's been a lot of work and stuff going on with college and such so I fell a little behind on this. But I've just read the latest chapters now!
I loooved their grandparents. I was just imagining that dean would fall in love with their grandma after she presented them with her pie, and I was right ahah! Grandpa was just as cool.
And that final scene with the tattoo was something i really wasn't expecting! Poor girl had to spend all that time with his hand on her boob... Not that she minded, cause its obvious there's something blossoming between them.
Please keep updating this! :D

I'm still around. Just got a lot going on and haven't been able to read much.

Heehee the last chapter was hilarious. OMG The tattoo artist, Dean's struggle to get pie, knowing so much about the family really makes you think he's trying to get on their good side. I wonder what shall happen next.

@ Total Nightmare
@ Post Mortem
@ rockyhorror052008

Hope you three are still reading! We miss hearing from you! :3

Now this chapter had a mixture of humor and nostalgia. I loved it! I can't wait to see what the other chapters have to offer.

Duuude, we did it! loved the last chapter. It was amazing and beautifully written. You're amazing and I appreciate all of the researching you did. Maybe I'll research more for the next one and do most of the dirty work on that one to give you a break. Seriously though, great chapter!

The two of you never cease to amaze me.
These last two chapters have left me quite speechless. Dean and Sam taking on the girls as apprentices, the little hints of romance blossoming. I can see it in the near future brewing in upcoming chapters.
The ending of a first case, it was a beautiful idea and I have to say a lot of research went into making this a great way to end one hunt and prepare for the next. I'm seriously in awe at how awesome it is. Well you crazy kids, I'm looking forward to those updates that are cooking. :D Keep up the super awesome amazing work.

Ahhhhhh!!!
I can handle this I promise!
Damnit just had to do twist ending.
Not that I don't like it lol