If He Only Knew - Comments

OMG......this was nothing freaking short of amazing! This has to be one of the most intriguing and bad ass stories I've read in along time. No fooling. I lived how intense it was and I was so shocked that shew blew Lyndsey away! (But secretly happy lol)!

I recently;y found this story and all I can say to start is this is amazing. First off I love the way you managed to describe in detail how she was feeling. She was hurting inside and outside and I could feel it through your words. Second. the decision of throwing everything that belonged to him or his mistress was brilliant. She was right not to cheat on him to get revenge because she didn't want to go down to his level. I was quiet surprise when I read that she actually shot at the mistress when I thought she was just going to scare them off. It was surprising but I loved how it ended making the reader for more.

You have a great writing style. You managed to use vivid words that draws the reader more and more into the story. This was very well written and I'm going to check out the sequel because I NEED to know what happens next.

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I just read this and I must say: wow.
I can just feel the pure betrayal and anger within her.
Feeling cheated, I can imagine, is like a stab through the heart with a deadly dagger.
Man, I did not expect her to shoot the slut though!
Like shit!
Matt you fucked up...big time.
But damn, Haven really went off the edge.
I don't blame her though, in my opinion...

Love this!

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Hello lovelies! I just posted the 1st chapter to the sequel.
Thank you, all of you, for commenting and reading this!
It means so much to me! I give you all virtual hugs : )

Absolute awesomeness!!

love the story will there be a sequel

I definitely think this deserves a sequel. I'd love to know if she gets caught. Please?

i would love to read the sequel! :)

You have to do a sequel!! It was so awesome and bad ass.

I could barely read it. I was getting so pissed. Fuck you Matt! And your dead hooker lady!